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Reviewer: JayfeatherxSnowstorm Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2012 4:49 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Transformation

yes! yes plz write another chapter!!!! please!!! i want to see what happens! I like what you did with the story though. usually people would have inuyasha forget about the jewel, but this is wickedly awesome! please write more!!!





Reviewer: ToastyLove Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2011 1:47 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Transformation

I really like this!! I really wish for you to continue this! I see alot in this, I love stories where Inu goes demon and starts acting hella possessive. but then somehow he goes back to his half demon self -.- which I hate, but if that's what your going for in the end thats fine aha. anyways I love this story already the second he said "What bitch?!" LMA0. Hmm maybe Kag can love the demon and he too. who knows but yes great start and I can wait for more! :)





Reviewer: DarkNeko Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2011 8:10 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Transformation

Wow, I like this :) Good job, for your first fic! Maybe add a little more detail next time, then it'll be perfect :3





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2011 5:17 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Transformation

Sorry I do not realy care for this to much as I for one think even his demon side cares for her more then it showed at the end.  I could see the demon doing most of the stuff you dhould but ont the part “Good. Now you understand your place. You’re scared I can smell it.”.   I do not think the demon half would want her scared of him.  I could see the demon doing all the things he did upto that point as it just being more agressive and not reallising it is scaring her when it thinks he is more or less corting her but this pushed it past that.



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