Date: March 07, 2013 1:18 am
Chapter number: 9
Title: Together (Chapter 9)
In Chapter 9, did you take the lemon scene from Chapter 3 of Mating Season by SplendentGoddess? You changed a few words but the dialogue, descriptions, and overall progression is the exact same.
Date: April 01, 2009 2:18 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Attacked (Chapter 1)
AWESOME! It's about time, damn it. I've read several stories like this, and the damn rapist gets off to easy, I say. I'm glad Inu acts like himself and guts the damn pigs...I myself have a story I'm currently working on about this same subject, over on fanfic, but since Naraku himself is the rapist, it's a little different...its an angst fic called malice. Of course, Naraku will get his ass gutted by Inu, but it will be a while.
Anyway, great job on portraying Inu, personally, this is the most in character ive seen in a fic like this!
Date: January 22, 2008 10:55 pm
Chapter number: 12
Title: Home !(Epilogue)
I usualy hte rape stories, but this one was exceptional. I think it accurately depicted how a victem feels and I like how Inuyasha changed his attitude to help her though it. All in all, a very good job.
Date: June 24, 2007 2:32 am
Chapter number: 10
Title: Morning (Chapter 10)
HAHA!!! Inu first was BUSTED!!!
Then he is left with a pervert monk...[but heyy there is nothing wrong with being a pervert...Im one ...lol ]
And kagomes spoiled brat Ship-dip.
HEHEHEHEh! i wouldnt want to be that situation..lol unless i get to bother him lol =]
Date: June 24, 2007 1:25 am
Chapter number: 7
Title: Search (Chapter 7)
Frickin Kikyou.. I loved how portrayed her. For me ..i hate her.. shes just a snob and highly conceited..but ne who.. So far let me say i think you done a good job on how kagome reacts and how she is takin time to heal. where as in some fics, she is either forced to heal or has a 'speedy recovery' well i wanna read the rest today.. so on the chapter 8! lol