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Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2009 1:47 am
Chapter number: 11
Title: Hurt

This chapter bothers me because even though I know that it's a story I also know that Dr.s don't just take a living persons heart to give to someone else, even if that someone else offered it up.





Reviewer: sassy_101 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2008 6:55 pm
Chapter number: 13
Title: Fun at the Park

that was really sweet and sad, it was a great story!!!!!!





Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2007 1:52 pm
Chapter number: 7
Title: Feelings

Well it wouldnt be thatbad .. he would never cheat on u..lik imsacred right now he might 'accidently' do wit kiki while shes gone.... but thats 'life' lol
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Author's Response: lol that's actually a good idea, but i thought since i made the beginning of the story so upbeat that i would save that for later! i'm going to try to put more feelings in there but i don't want to give too much away! Thanks for reviewing! if you have any ideas that you might think would be appropriate for the story please tell me! thanks!





Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2007 1:28 pm
Chapter number: 4
Title: Past Life

Man that wasnt that bad of a secret... why wouldnt ne one accept him.. hemust likthose stuck up bitches... snapp.. iwould be his friend lol =]





Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2007 1:01 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: Meeting You

wow! Every thing is happening so FAST! And how is 'Kiki' there... then again it doenst have to be kikyou just another girl. =]





Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2007 12:46 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue

AWWW... how frickin sweet... gonna cry.. Mirok u and Sango are assholes ..why dont u rubbit in some more !!!!
R4K



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