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Reviewer: Inuyasha_lover101 Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2011 4:33 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: Sizzling sweetheart

Loved it! Can't wait til the next chapter :3

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you like it :)





Reviewer: Dusk Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2011 5:05 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Sizzling sweetheart

Well, you certainly have been busy lately. All these new stories. And being a person that really likes getting feedback and seeing that you had no reviews I felt that someone should respond to your work.

First off, I think this story line is pretty great. The asylum, the different stories, and the way you twist reality and fantasy are really good. I would like a bit more detail to flesh out the surroundings but the emotion- the confusion and the determined need to escape- are well written. I'm also looking forward to the characters becoming more in-depth but I assume that will develope as the story progresses. 

I can't wait to seeing how this turns out. As a side note I also enjoyed the beginning of your other story- Disenchanted, I think. With all these new stories it looks like you'll be busy. Keep up the good work. :)    



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the feedback :)

I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I'll make the surroundings more detailed. The characters will be developing with the story, I promise that. I'm also glad you like Disenchanted.



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