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Reviewer: JakkaruKitsune Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2010 2:15 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

OMG I'm loving this! Please update soon :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :D





Reviewer: Dusk Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2010 9:35 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Not bad. Be sure to edit more thoroughly next chapter, you have some mistakes- such as when you wrote 'kissing the grown' instead of 'kissing the ground.' Keep working on it and I look forward to seeing the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Damn...thats embarrassing! I knew there was something wrong with that sentence! Thanks for helping :)





Reviewer: Patty530 Signedstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2010 7:57 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

I liked it! Very Good. Can't wait for your update.

Author's Response: Thanks :D



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