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Reviewer: JediK1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2007 12:49 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Breathing

Good start!  Is this canon, or AU?  It's a little hard to tell with just this teasing little intro!  There are some moments where it seems you're using run-on sentances, but other than that, good job!  Please continue soon!





Reviewer: InuGrrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2007 4:49 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Breathing

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Reviewer: mayra Anonymousstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 6:07 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Breathing

ples cntinue d story i wnt 2 knw wat coms nxt





Reviewer: alshinokia Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 10:18 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Breathing

it was a great story buuuut could you make another fanfic?


Author's Response: I've been trying..I do have another chapter half writen for this..I even have another story in my head but, every time i start writing it comes out horrible..I think i have writes block..And it sucks. I'm trying everyday though. Everytime i get an idea. So i'm sorry for the wait!





Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 2:25 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Breathing

Wait if u get out of school at the end of the week u a senior?
`r4k

Author's Response: Oh, god i wish i was a senior this year...I'm going to just be done. It will finally give me time to write. (As long as my family doesn't get in the way.. ^_^)





Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 2:23 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Breathing

Yo so dramatic!
i FRICKIN LOVE IT!
Let me guess though inu froze bcaz she reminded him of Kikyou?
Im in a guessin mood. =]
did i get it right though?
lol
Oh well i love it so far.!
Hope u keep goin wit it!
`much respect
r4k

Author's Response: WOW, you just gave me a total bost on this story. Okay you caugh me, it was because she reminded him of Kikyo.(I don't mind giving hints on chapters just not giving the whole thing away.lol)



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