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Reviewer: purduepup Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2010 10:17 pm
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3

*sniffles* IT'S OVER! DX *bursts into hysterics*

/cue time-skip/ 

Okay, I'm done now. :)

But this story? I love it. :D At first, Kagome was this block of ice even worse than Sesshoumaru, and for those chapters, I kind of - um, hehe - hated her. o.o But this chapter really helped out: Kagome begins showing emotions, even though she's manipulative, and somewhat opens up on her past. ^.^ I like how things fell together, even if Kagome's way of coming back to him was strange, and the ending was a suptle way of, well, ending it. XD

Whenever I read the title, I automatically have the image of honey that's hollow - like, something sweet with no filling, or something like that. Maybe that was supposed to portray Kagome: sweet on the outside, yet has nonexistent feelings...? (I honestly don't know; that's the best guess I could word out correctly. -.-')

Anyway, I LOVED it! :D This is definitely one of the best short stories I ever read, and I can't wait to see updates for your other stories! ^.^





Reviewer: purduepup Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2010 3:44 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2

Awesome! :D Kagome's really complicated in this story - and I love it. ^.^ I'm happy she dumped Kouga - YAY! - unless there's some twist, like she's secretly dating him or something... o.O I also love how you went into Kagome's past; I thought it was interesting kind of seeing her thoughts on things. :)

Man, I love this story; it's so great. :O I'm anticipating the next chapter! :D





Reviewer: purduepup Signedstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 28, 2010 4:15 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

This is so great. How it switches POVs every so often, and the whole concept of it is interesting, eye-catching, and well-written. :) I feel really bad for Inuyasha, though, being used and whatnot, while Kagome's being used to, but is weird and not responding to it. Honestly? It's a tough situation I can't wait to read about some more. I look forward to reading the next chapter! ^.^





Reviewer: inuyasha_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2010 6:08 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

I kind of like the twist that you put in Kagome's character. Please update soon.



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