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Reviewer: Ai Kisugi Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2010 4:04 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

I like your thoughtful little twist on an old cliche. The only thing I would have wished for was more details on what Kagome said. How Inuaysha reacted to Kagome after telling off Kouga for good. And perhaps a nice little snuggle with Inu/Kags when all was said and done. But thanks for the story. It was fun. :-)

Author's Response:

Oh, I know this could have had more detail, but I was in a minimalist mood and wanted to leave quite a bit to the reader's imagination, so I left it at that!

Amber





Reviewer: anhimals Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2010 6:42 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

I wish there was a like button like on Facebook. I think that button speaks volume when one simply like the story but have no witty comment to make ;)

Author's Response:

LOL... you know, that sounds good!

Amber





Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2010 4:11 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

trying not to wake up the house with laughter, great story.

Author's Response:

Wow, I think the dates on this says how long it's been since I've been on here... glad you enjoyed it!

Amber





Reviewer: Patty530 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2010 11:34 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Finally....Kagome grew some. Put that clay chamber pot in her place! Yay!


Sorry...lack of sleep + to much caffine = well, stupidity. :)

Author's Response:

LoL!  I understand... glad you liked it!

 Amber



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