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Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2014 5:39 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

This was beautiful. It was very creative, and had a great flow to it. Each piece, like the songs Kagome is so adept at, blended seamlessly into the next. This was inspiration at its finest. The characterizations you used were adorable! I absolutely loved this. Well done!





Reviewer: Patty530 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2010 8:36 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

*sighs happily* Perfect bit of fluff for those of us that need a daily fluff fix. Sweet. Loved every word.

Author's Response: Thank you very much :)





Reviewer: lonelydusk Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2010 5:48 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

It's kind of strange how people never incorporate people with 'disabilities' in their stories- characters are usually perfect, aren't they (I am guilty for implementing this in my art and my writing so...)? But, I am glad that you have treaded on that subject, especially with such added elegance.

I love how Inuyasha doesn't mind it at all... he still thinks she is enrapturing despite her flaws. "What a man what a man what a man what a mighty fine man..."

 And the way he was all shy and such when he was meeting her- how cute, and very expected out of his character. They seemed to 'get it on' really quickly, though,  but I don't mind LOL

Yes - this story was very good!! I would love a sequel as well.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. I usually have the same problem with making characters perfect--at least close to it. So I figured, why not?

I will probably make a sequel to this someday soon :)





Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2010 4:33 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

very good, I would love a sequal

Author's Response: Thank you very much. A few people have requested the same so I probably will.



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