Date: May 19, 2010 1:54 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this story was incredibly hilarious. You, Desenchanter, have a knack for thinking up such adorable plot-lines! This made me crack up when I was reading fanfiction before going to bed... my roommate probably thought I was ultra weird.
"Hey babe" --- I literally laughed out loud because I could totally see Inuyasha texting that. TOTALLY. The way you described their characters totally fit, and the fact Inuyasha and Kagome were always jabbing at each other with snippy remarks was so hilarious. And really cute too. Sigh~!
I wish this story would have been drawn out more! It was such a cute plotline and everything worked out perfectly. This is definitely DEFINITELY one of my favorites... I will read more of your stories and hope, maybe, one day Miscommunication will become a few chapters longer! :)
(Okay, a girl can dream..)
Date: May 11, 2010 11:31 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2
Very cute, it kinda reminds me of 'Sleepless in Seatle' but with your own origional flair. You did a fantastic job with the emotional portrayals of each character. Great story and I can't wait to read more of your work.
Author's Response: Yeah, Sleepless in Seattle and You've Got Mail were influences. Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed the story :)