Date: October 28, 2010 11:25 pm
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4
I'm enjoying this. Thanks for writing two new chapters. As I was reading I came up with a few ideas. Feel free to use or discard them. (I just can't help but to think up new plots as I read...)
I can see Kouga making a few plays for Kagome. Perhaps similair to 'Ah My Goddess' where the Goddess is forced to be the girlfriend to a human. I'm a big Inu/Kag shipper, so I wouldn't want Kagome to be permanately stuck with Kouga, but it could really get under Inuyasha's skin and make him a little jealous.
I was also thinking about Inuyasha becoming a half-demon in this story as well. He starts to do some good things and ends up being a half demon. As things progress perhaps Kagome does a few naughty things (like kiss demon Inu) and becomes a half angel. That could make for some fun plotting.
You could also have Inuaysha introduce Ayame (the demon) to keep Kouga away from Kagome. But that'll backfire of course...
Another funny scene could be Kouga going on a date with Kagome, because she is somehow forced to because of a wish or the contract... And she actually have a tangible precense (maybe like in Rinne where he can wear a haori of the underworld to become a ghost or tangible) and eat sweets. I bet she'd have a penchant for Udon and chocolate! Inuyasha would be tailing them of course and trying to keep Kouga from getting his hands on Kagome.
This story could also benefit from Inuyasha finding out that he's really not all that bad. That his dad was a demon and his mom was an angel. And that he really wasn't supposed to go to hell, but heaven wouldn't accept him. Maybe Inuyasha could do something truly self-sacrificing in this story that gives him wings and makes him an angel instead?
OK. Lots of ideas. Have fun. That's what writing is all about! :-)
Author's Response: LOL! Too many ideas. Actually, I have little idea where I want to go with this, but I already have an outline on what I want. So, I don't know... :D Though it's nice that someone can think of so many scenarios possible for this story.
Date: July 20, 2010 7:44 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2
So cute! I like Inuyasha's underhanded ways here... hehehe. And he certainly makes one heck of a sexy demon. So the question is... how is Kagome supposed to help out Kouga now? Hope to see the next chapter soon! :)
Thanks very much!
Ah, who knows? Not even I.