Date: May 12, 2010 3:31 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: how my life became terrible
Coming along very nicely, don't forget to take a little bit of extra time to go back through for an edit session, it works better if you wait about 30min then come back to it as well. Also I realize your writing this from Kags point of view but it would be cool if you had some of Yash's thoughts as well, especially considering he's treating her so OOC. Very good work, and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: tanx. i'll take ur advice
Date: April 29, 2010 5:16 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: how it all started.
Fantastic start, I can't wait to see where you go with this and to find out what got Yash so pissed off.
Author's Response: thank you, i rlly don't know wat 2 rwrite about this is my first story i every wrote online about inuyasha.