Reviews For Tales of the Heart
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Reviewer: vampire liaison Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2007 6:09 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Compassionless: Escape to the New World

i think you need to work a little on blendeding your writing. this way ti is harder to get into it and forget im reading something. im not sure what it is, but read it over and you'll see that its somehow not as smooth as it should be. nothing a few revisions cant fix. on a more positive note, the idea is really unique, and im looking forwad to seeing where you go with it.





Reviewer: alshinokia Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2007 7:36 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Compassionless: Escape to the New World

when are you going to make another chapter of this? pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease make another one





Reviewer: alshinokia Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2007 5:15 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Compassionless: Escape to the New World

it is a very mystirous story and i think tht u should make another lead to it when she meets inuyasha and falls in love with him



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