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Reviewer: ThisIsMeSmiling Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2010 4:24 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Phoenix

LOL @ Sesshomaru's thought. He knows he's just jealous ;p But wow! I felt so sad for Inu and the pain he felt watching his mate get burned. That she turned out okay is awesome...and the transformation was really creative! Great job!

~Amber :D



Author's Response: Thanks ever so much! I know.... he can admit the truth in his mind but never aloud! Wanted to do something different and I think I got it! *GLOMPS*





Reviewer: kmoaton Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2010 2:07 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Phoenix

I had to bounce over here and review!  I completely loved this.  You could just feel the agony Inuyasha had to go through watching Kagome burn but knowing she came out the other side youkai made this wonderful!!



Author's Response: Squee!! Thanks! It was a fun and intense one to write! I'm really pleased I was able to convey his torment in this ficlet!





Reviewer: MadMistress65 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2010 10:22 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Phoenix

OMG, Nikkie, that was AWESOME!!  I especially loved the last line.  I nearly shed tears with Inu and could almost feel the flames.  You did good.  SQUEEEEE!

Author's Response: Thankies so very much!! *beams happily* It came out quite well for the 300 words! *GLOMPAGE*





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2010 9:52 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Phoenix

Beautiful, Nikkie.  I could really feel InuYasha's anguish as he watched Kagome burn - very powerful stuff, and you still managed to pull out a sweet ending.  :)

Author's Response: SQUEEE! *GLOMPAGE* Thanks! I'm glad I was able to convey it in the small amount of words. rnrnHe really needed those sutras so he wouldn't interfere with Kagome's trial. They both went into it knowing everything including the horrible 'death'. *Glomps even more*rnrn*bounces* I'm really pleased with this new take on Kagome becoming a Youkai! *bounces even more*



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