Date: February 01, 2010 2:02 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: Treacherous Romance: Chapter 2
Well. I was expecting another sad ending. But it's better this way. I'm not in the right mood for tears right now, lol.
Where to start? I absolutely loved the 1st person narration. As I already told you in the past, I'm not fond of such things, because I like it when different points of view are included. But when it comes to one-shots, I guess it is more than okay (: The characters were a lot human, in my opinion. Inuyasha was rough yet caring, Kagome was in love yet conniving. Kaguya didn't surprise me in the end. After all, she only wanted her baby to be properly raised and she wasn't exactly in love with her husband, not to mention that Kagome had become a good friend who saved their lives even though she wasn't supposed to.
The story was awesome, the lemony scenes too! I'm only wondering... whatever happened to Onigumo and friends? I mean, Inuyasha was still their target and he kept Kagome as his lover. Eventually, they found out she wasn't dead, or didn't they?
10/10 Anyway (:
Author's Response: I wanted to leave Onigumo & Co out of the ending, because I figured they might try to kill him again, but I did mention Inuyasha increasing everyone's protection, so... :) Anyway, thank you so so much for the review, I'm so glad you liked it :)
Date: January 31, 2010 12:13 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Treacherous Romance: Chapter 1
I definitely love your one-shots.
I take it this isn't the end, since a two-piece is planned? Oh, please, update soon :) I'm going to have so many things to say about it, I'm sure. ^^
Author's Response: Whoooo, thank you :) Can't wait for your full reeview, I think I'm going to post my next chapter tomorrow. It's already finished and all, but it's best if I upload tomorrow :D Glad you're already interested ^_^