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Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2009 9:17 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Nice work on this story.  You put alot of feeling in this and it show well.  I think you did a great job for your first story.  I recomend your your next story you have more people in it.  The people playing off each other can help make or break many storys.  Good job.





Reviewer: einehexe Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2009 3:23 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting, nice fic :) I liked the amount of feeling in it, and the fact that you left some things in the dark for us to imagine. It's best that way. Good job :)



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