Date: December 29, 2009 1:59 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1
Just so you know, promise is misspelled in the title. Though the summary looks facsinating, a misspelling so early and so obvious hurts your credibility. A quick fix would go a long way. I still plan to read the story (I'm a sucker for beauty and the Beast in any form), but there are people who will put it aside because of the title issue. One of my favorite authors on this site left my story for half a year unread because of spelling errors in my bio and a pet peeve. He only read it after I asked. Otherwise, good luck, and I will be back in chapter specific reviews. Good luck.
Author's Response: Thank you for the info. I have corrected the spelling.