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Reviewer: la623 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2009 12:20 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Empty Heart sad...

Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2009 9:38 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Empty Heart

I remember this one, too.  I absolutely loved your analogy here, and the final line in particular is very powerful, as is this one: With gentle claws, he picked through the remains of his empty heart.

Really moving stuff.  Of course, I'm brightened by the fact that I know how it ends, but he still has another year after this was written; it had to have been hard.  Not many can really capture what he must have been going through during that time, but I think you did it beautifully here.  Awesome work.  


Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)

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