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Reviewer: Kinky-Hoe Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2010 9:03 pm
Chapter number: 5
Title: Not Regular

Shit. I sometimes wonder why I keep on reading these one-shots. They always leave me with a bitter feeling and a lump in the throat.

I think this was one of the most beautiful pieces of your collection. Kagome's portrayal was amazing, although you were more focused on Inuyasha. Maybe that's exactly why. She was amazing because he thought so (:

10/10!



Author's Response: "She was amazing because he thought so" - I really, really loved this line, it sounds so perfect :) Thank you so much, you're a sweetheart :) This collection is meant to be a bit bitter, but I like it like this for some reason. It makes you think, doesn't it? :) Thank you once again :D





Reviewer: Kinky-Hoe Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20, 2010 12:23 pm
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Tale of a Prostitute

Gods, you made me cry. No, no, I'm not pregnant, this isn't due to hormones -- You really made me cry. I feel so silly, lol. I worship happy endings, but I admit having a thing for sad endings too. Gah.

What's there to say. At least they loved each other.

I was afraid that Kikyo or someone else was going to be the main problem. You put drugs and body selling. The body is only temporary.

You are so great (: Now, if you don't mind, I need to blow my nose.



Author's Response: Did you... really cry? Wow, I feel so flattered, thank you, thank you :) I'm glad it managed to touch you, I was hoping it would :)





Reviewer: la623 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20, 2010 2:58 am
Chapter number: 3
Title: The Tale of a Prostitute

awww...so sad...but so beautifully written...





Reviewer: la623 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02, 2009 3:01 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Yume

wow...i really loved this one shot...it was really beautiful. :)

Author's Response: Thank you :)





Reviewer: Kinky-Hoe Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2009 5:35 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Prostitute

Lol, I know you like Kagome's character too much to have her portrayed as a total and utter whore. But, I don't know, I thought prostitute could be better. But you're the author, eh; you choose!

You're welcome ;)



Author's Response:

I chose prostitute. Thanks again :)

 And yes, I do like  Kagome a whole lot, I guess...





Reviewer: Kinky-Hoe Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2009 5:16 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: The Prostitute

...Holy shit.

Angsty piece, and I'm usually not fond of such oneshots, but this one was perfect! I absolutely loved the characterization and the whole realistic side of the story. I am, of course, frustrated, as we'll never know how the characters will end up, but it does feel right this way, somehow. We didn't know how Inuyasha felt at the beginning and then we didn't know how Kagome felt at the end. Creative, I think. I just thought it was a lot pejorative to title the oneshot "The Whore" and to mention Kagome as a whore in the summary... I'm not one to avoid taboos, but since Kagome is obviously not content with her 'job', I'd say she's just a prostitute.

Anyway, 10/10!!

Cheers.



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much :) Every person that reads this comments about its pejorative side, but for me it actually underlines the impact and emphasizes the feelings I wanted to express. But you do have a point. I'll think about it... the prostitute does sound a bit more... fitting, I guess, now that you've mentioned it.

I'm so glad you liked it... 10 outta 10? Why, thank you :)



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