Date: September 21, 2009 4:11 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Glory of Love
Well, I was left wondering about the pairing and the rating... You said it was Inu/Kag, and yet she gets carried off by Sesshoumaru. Also, the Salacious rating implies heavy, gory violence and/or sexual situations. Other than that, and the fact that we've never really heard Inuyasha compare her to Kikyou since the 5th manga (and in total, a grand spanking two times), I thought the scene where he died was done pretty well. =) Keep improving!
Yea I had the wrong rating. Thanks for pointing that out. I would not have noticed if you had not said anything.
Well to be honest Kagome could not have been carried off by Inuyasha since he is in fact dead so it had to be someone, I happened to pick sesshy boy.