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Reviewer: JakkaruKitsune Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2011 3:41 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Journey’s Beginnings

Please continue?





Reviewer: Deathmvp Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2009 3:14 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: Journey’s Beginnings

Nice story I look forward to more. 





Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2009 5:07 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Journey’s Beginnings

I can't wait to see what you have planned next, and I'm truly enjoying this story so far.





Reviewer: Harmony Sunsinger Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2009 4:13 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Journey’s Beginnings

GAH! Holding me in suspense like this is EVILLL!!!
Btw, you are needed on LJ, ma'am. No more lurkdom for you, co-mod! XD





Reviewer: Harmony Sunsinger Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14, 2009 3:46 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Deep Thoughts

Nice cliffhanger!
Slight grammar nazi note: "feudal" instead "futile."
And it strikes a little strangely going from the initial Kag first person POV to third person narrator. Maybe make that first part into a thought of Kagome's?

Great start, though.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I don't know why but I had a hard start on the intro and it was just too late for the "feudal" part.  I noticed it later.



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