Date: September 13, 2009 10:46 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Deep Thoughts
Slight grammar nazi note: "feudal" instead "futile."
And it strikes a little strangely going from the initial Kag first person POV to third person narrator. Maybe make that first part into a thought of Kagome's?
Great start, though.
Thanks, I don't know why but I had a hard start on the intro and it was just too late for the "feudal" part. I noticed it later.