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Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2014 5:56 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

This was so very sweet. The words that you used held such power, and the flow worked beautifully. I found myself drawn in from the very beginning, and even though my heart ached in the middle there I could tell that it would be okay in the end. It was great to read this woven tale of sorrow, because it held such a tangible feeling. Very well done, thank you for sharing!





Reviewer: la623 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2009 4:46 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

awww...this was soo sweet!





Reviewer: chou_zero Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2009 5:33 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

This is really good. I wish you had fleshed it out some more. Maybe told us the actual conversations and gone into details about about how he felt when Kagome left. I'd just love to see more of this.



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