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Reviewer: Harmony Sunsinger Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2009 1:15 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Memory

I agree wholeheartedly about the kotodama. I feel like its a way to remind inuyasha of what he had with Kagome. My friend and I used to misuse it in our stories when we were much, much younger, but we've obviously grown out of it.
This was a really sweet, sad oneshot. As always, you are brilliant. :)





Reviewer: psyco_chick32 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2009 11:08 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Memory

Very tear-jerking!  My lower lip was all wibbly by the end!

I agree with you whole-heartedly on the kotodama.  Yes, it "subjugates" him... but I believe it also puts them on a similar level and has been used to save his life (and to bring him out of his first youkai-rage).  I don't think he'd take it off even if she removed the enchanment - then again, tbh, I don't think he'd let her, out of the underlying fear he has about his youkai "coming out to play" as it were...

^_^ Sorry, looks like I joined you on that soapbox!  I'll hop off now too, LOL!  Beautiful writing - well done :)





Reviewer: sarafina Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2009 5:09 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Memory

i liked it! sooo sad! *pouts*





Reviewer: kmoaton Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2009 3:34 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Memory

This was wonderful.  I wanted to cry by the end of it.  It was so beautiful and agree about the connection between them through the kotodama. 

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! I feel like such a minority sometimes, because I like the kotodama for that reason, but that's it. Only you and Selina seem to agree with me on it so far. ^^v It's nice to not be alone!





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2009 3:01 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Memory

*holds back tears* 

So moving; I don't cry too often from fanfic, but this one definitely pushed me.  That was a unique situation/idea you had for them, and although it was very sad, I enjoyed it.  And I agree with you on the kotodama.  

Beautiful!



Author's Response: Aww, thanks! Sorry I made you almost cry!! ^///^ I really wish I could have shortened it, but Kags had too much to say here. I'll forgive her, she's old here and likes to tell stories. Thank you!!!! <3



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