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Reviewer: ivy221 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2016 8:16 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue

Personally Its confusing not saying its not good but It has No explanation other Then Kikyos a bitch and we all know that





Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2014 2:15 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue

This was beyond powerful. It really came together, and it had a nice flow to it. The story was dark, painted with haunting words that gave me chills. While reading I had no idea which direction it was going, but that last line really made it all come together. Very well done, thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: Someone here has been rereading my first works... (hides in a corner) I'm glad you liked this one-shot as well. It was really meant to be the prologue of a very dark, very disturbing story but I'd rather keep it as a smutty one-shot/some kind of PWP goodness. I do enjoy dark stories but it's hard for me to write them because what and when I write depends solely on my mood and I can't be depressed 24/7. Hopefully I'll update my other works pretty soon (I'm so busy right now it's ridiculous).





Reviewer: einehexe Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03, 2009 10:55 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue

Dear Heavens! I really must say I didn't expect something of this magnitude when I read the summary of your story. And the song is spot-on!

This has to be one of the best things I've ever read. Amazing job :) I'm surprised I didn't see it on FF.net. Must have skipped it...

If you ever decide to make it a full story, I'll be first to read every chapter (:



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