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Reviewer: Kylainu Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2010 12:16 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Save Me, Heal Me, Hold Me

THAT WAS GREAT YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER!!!!!!!





Reviewer: Vampire Liaison Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2009 9:18 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Save Me, Heal Me, Hold Me

Only Kagome could nearly get raped...and the proceed to usethe word bejeebers. Laughed aloud at that, although I'm not sure if it was supposed to be funny.

Author's Response: Well, Kagome isn't exactly known for foul language in either the anime or the manga. It wasn't exactly funny, but it was something of a tension breaker.





Reviewer: blue orchid Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2008 6:44 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Save Me, Heal Me, Hold Me

Well written story. It was deeply touching as well as sensual. Really enjoyed the manner in which they connected.





Reviewer: inuyasha4lyf Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2008 2:11 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Save Me, Heal Me, Hold Me

lmao... i love this story.. and YOU!

good job! :D

~inuyasha4lyf♥~



Author's Response: Thanks!





Reviewer: Inu Hanyou Nikkie Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 3:22 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Save Me, Heal Me, Hold Me

Squeals!! Yay!! The story is here and full of squish!! Well that is after he saves her! Love it when he takes care of her in his Youkai form. I am very happy that when you write about a touchy subject you do so with much respect, thank you!! I loved that Inuyasha was alerted to Kagome missing by her mother! I honestly haven't seen that before! Kudos!! Really enjoyed the puzzlement Inuyasha gave her when he didn't fuss as much to come to her time and stay! I liked that Kagome fought and ran when she could! I really love the connection that you create between the two of them. That Inuyasha doesn't like having to acknowledge the effects she has on him. I wonder if Inuyasha added jii-chan's swears to his already expansive collection? The idiot really did a huge No-No he touched Kagome and then he spilled her blood. Inuyasha won't be pretty reasonable until he has pounded the living stuffing out of them. Yep!! I love Inuyasha's primal claim!! I liked how Kagome is able to get through to Inuyasha and WHOOTT!! for her saying if they try it ever again with anyone she'll give her permission to eliminate them! Good for Inuyasha to give him a permnament reminder and warning! They better listen if they know what is best and healthy for them!! I do like the momentary fear that Kagome had when Inuyasha removed her upper clothes. She is so confused and this made it even more realistic! Kudos! I love how he tends her wounds!! I loved how Kagome called Inuyasha back and then kissed him. Swoons very happily!! Bravo!! Kudos!! Whoot!! I really love the ending... Kagome isn't one to let what he said twice go without anything being said and Inuyasha's inward thoughts!! Too priceless!!





Reviewer: InuGoddess715 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 4:38 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Save Me, Heal Me, Hold Me

Nice one-shot. I really liked this. I truly hate people like the ones who tried to rape Kagome. I almost wish that Kagome had allowed Inuyasha to get them....but that wouldn't have been good for either of them. The guilt would have damaged Kagome, and Inuyasha would have felt bad for not feeling worse about killing them. And Kagome's tears would have broken his heart, as they always do. So, I know why....I jsut wish it had been the right thing to do, lol.



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