Date: August 03, 2010 11:37 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1 A Home of Their Own
It was cute piece of slice of life. I noticed that you like adding customs of the American culture into your stories. But I don't think that Feudal Japan was familiar with housewarming customs. In the Nordic countries it used to be a family celebration and blessing of the house. The guests brought salt and bread. But I don't know how old that custom is. I'm sorry that I nitpick on these things, but when I personally write stories about foreign customs, I try to study them beforehand and get the facts straight. Of course, sometimes taking liberties is necessary.