Reviews For A Romp In The Park
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Reviewer: kneewalkingturkeys Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09, 2008 12:14 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Spring Is In The Air

Thank you for posting Romp in the Park. It is a very fun piece of work. You inspired me to read Ranma after reading  Romp in the Park. Thank you. I have now read 29 volumes of Ranma and enjoy all the pandas,pigs, ducks, kittens,pigtailed girls and panty stealing masters. You got more accomplished between Ranma/Akane and Inuyasha/Kagome in one night than RT did in over 20 years.Great Fun. I have volume 30 of Ranma on order and look forward to reading it.





Reviewer: Inu Hanyou Nikkie Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 7:28 pm
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 2: Oswari!

And now for chapter two!! Yay!! snickers... I think Ranma has caught on to Akane using something extra to fight him... I wonder what it could be.. winks.. Inuyasha is certainly learning some new things. Giggles!! I hope he'll be able to use the new teachings. And when you described the battle clothing! Awesome!! Swoons happily!! I really do love the way you write the pyshical and the verbal fights between the favourite couples! How you keep it true to RT!! That Rocks!! The characters so brillantly protrayed! I also like how you slarify that Inuyasha is a seasoned and expericenced fighter! (I wonder if they can teach each other? Inuyasha would benefit from some lessons maybe) I got the giggles at Ranma's technique for getting to Armie.. Loved how you allow Inuyasha to have normal feelings of being attracted to another abd still love Kagome!! Swoons!! and then to imagine Armie on Kagome!! Maybe he'll get his wish? (we know though don't we?) I am sooo very much loving this story again!! It feels like the first time I read it and I am finding all kinds of new things!! I can't wait for the next sketch to grow!! Loved when Inuyasha was wondering if he should save Ranma instead! So funny to read again!! Still find it really cute how Kagome is seeking out Inuyasha's warmth even as she sleeps! And the cluelessness of Inuyasha and Ranma with Akane's "ploy" to get him to remove his clothes. I do believe that she is and still did win.. I do love the interactions that you have with all of them!! How I am finding more and more quirks from both series that have been refined and sculpted into so much more!! And my favourite line here "this guy needed to be taken down a peg or two" I wonder if Inuyasha realizes the same could be said for him?? snickers happily!! I loved the way Ramna conceeded defeat to Akane and how they got closer and Inuyasha was feeling joyful at the scene then having KAgome waking up and of course very true to her character misinterupting everything and doing her famous I'm gonna jump to the wrong conclusions before I get all the facts mode!! KUDOS!!! Whooottttt!! Can't wait for the next chapter! Poor Inuyasha he was having so much fun and learning!!

Author's Response: You're too kind. Your enthusiasm is as much as writing the story (and as you know, that's a whole hell of a lot of fun!). Thanks again. ~Fano





Reviewer: KaGoMe_26 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 2:02 am
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 5: Rainshowers!

aww...so cute!!!!!





Reviewer: KaGoMe_26 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 1:27 am
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 4: Tears & Giggles

Aww...soo adorable!!!!!





Reviewer: KaGoMe_26 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 1:00 am
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 3: The Jewel

aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!that is soo CUTE!!!!!





Reviewer: KaGoMe_26 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 12:40 am
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 2: Oswari!

aww...so sweet!!!!!





Reviewer: KaGoMe_26 Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2007 11:54 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Spring Is In The Air

wow!!!!awsome!!!!





Reviewer: Inu Hanyou Nikkie Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2007 7:03 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 1: A Fight!

I am so happy to be able to read this here as well! I so love this Crossover! The way you exquistely describe everything! The way you have painted the characters! The way Inuyasha is relaxed and more carefree around Kagome, how she calmly sleeps knowing she is perfectly safe in a park with Inuyasha by her side! Swoons!! So very magical!! Loved how you described Inuyasha's thoughts about watching Kagome sleeping as a spell he can easily fall under, so very cute! And I did my fan-girl squee moment with Inuyasha scenting Ramne and wanting to get some of that miracle god-food! I love how you accurately protrayed Ranma and Akane with their very typical and often humourous fight scenes! How Ranma wanted his Ramne and *giggle* so does Inuyasha. How you make Inuyasha, Kagome, Akane and Ranma all true to RT's great design!! Wow!! and Whoot!! I loves it!! So very much!! Please keep it up and I can't wait to review the next chapter! a question where is the position of the Ramen during all this?

Author's Response: *snicker* are you going to review the whole thing again? *dies* the ramen just stays by the bushes getting cold when other things heat up.





Reviewer: Inu Hanyou Nikkie Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 2:44 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Prologue: Spring Is In The Air

Races around the room!! YAYYYYYY!!! It's Here!! It's Here!! It's Here!! Squeeesssssssss!!!!!!!! Bounces about and squees more!! Resumes the racing!!

Author's Response: heh. yep. why am i not suprised you were the first to notice? i'll probably put "Time" up here too...



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