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Reviewer: SuperNova Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2011 1:50 am
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3

Plz update this. Its amazing





Reviewer: olivia benton Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2011 8:05 pm
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3

Love the story! Please continue with writing it!





Reviewer: KyriaHitomi Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2009 4:23 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Escaping to the West

I like it very much! I hope you decide to continue the story. A couple small critiques: Inuyasha is rather OOC (though I suppose you could excuse that as having a more pleasant upbringing). Also, you have a couple near-malapropisms; for instance "luscious palace" was probably meant to be "luxurious palace." Otherwise your writing style is pleasant, engaging, and well paced. Hope this helps!

Author's Response:

Thanks for that, but I'm not a really grammer type person so... yeah. But the OOC Inuyasha I'm still trying to keep some of his traits in tact, but it has to go with the story for later.





Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2009 3:16 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Escaping to the West

Very good, I was a little worried for Kagome there at the begining and I love the line about Inuyasha taking Koga's head would start a war. Please keep writing, I can't wait to read more.



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