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Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02, 2009 6:02 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1 Paradise Beach

Still awesome!  And the revisions were good; added just enough detail in the right places!  0.~ 

I still love the idea of InuYasha at Paradise Beach, LMAO!!  It's a good thing they just got married, or else he might not have let Kagome get away with that!  :D  Great job, lady, and I'm putting this in my faves for when you update!  





Reviewer: TinanaBanana Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02, 2009 9:17 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1 Paradise Beach

oh i deffidently liked the last bit! Funny as hell :)



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