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Reviewer: Kinky-Hoe Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2009 5:56 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Tomorrow

Wow. Usually, I'm not that much into stories told in first person POV, but this piece is really well-written! I have to give you kudos for that. You're an amazing writer (:

Author's Response: Thank you very much very much, and WOW for your compliment.  I think I may be blushing.  I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.  :D





Reviewer: einehexe Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28, 2009 7:19 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Tomorrow

I enjoyed this immensely. NIce job :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!





Reviewer: inuyashaloverr Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2009 2:45 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Tomorrow

This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association!

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Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02, 2009 6:06 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Tomorrow

There are just a few tense inconsistencies, but they're not even really noticable unless you're really paying attention to that, and it's too hard to do that with such steamy smex going on!  *waggles brows*  And first person can be difficult, but you did well! 

I absolutely love this, girl, and the realness really rings in it, which makes me love it even more.  I think I ruined my chair reading this!  XD  Awesome job! 



Author's Response: You are such a trip!!  LMAO  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing ... yet a second time when I haven't even gotten around to reciprocating even once >.>  Can we even say how much I suck right now?  Thanks for the proofread job too.  Tenses are a bitch, girl.  And by the time I read over it again, my eyes are bugging and I can't think straight.  I need a second and third set of eyeballs, for sure.



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