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Reviewer: cesuraee Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2014 12:50 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Though it all happened very quick I still love this story. I think the fact that they fell in love so quickly just shows how meant to be they were! It's InuYasha and Kagome, so I would never think their union was too rushed! I love the overall plot of this. InuYasha as a personal trainer just fits, and I love how Kagome was ogling him in the beginning. Well done. Thank you for sharing!





Reviewer: Inuyashalover94 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2008 6:06 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2

great job. you are a good writer!!





Reviewer: friend Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2008 10:47 pm
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2

please put in new chapters

 





Reviewer: Ro0tin4Kagome Signedstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 4:13 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2

I liked the plot of the story..but i think this story was rushed.
I thought they only went through 2 days and their already in luv and r mates.... and it was such a concidence[sp?] that shippou got the right doctor... Ilik the story but thats just my opinion on it.
I thinku could make it better!
=]
R4K

Author's Response: You know, you're right. I've been reading and re-reading it and it did look rushed. Whenever I get the chance, I'm going to do some serious editing. I've just been lazy with a serious case of writer's block (that sucks). Thanks for your input. ^_^ 



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