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Reviewer: Roxotaku Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2009 12:11 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Love the way you interwove InuYasha's protective concern with the sweetness of Atae at play, and the last line made me laugh - excellant!





Reviewer: Selina MacCloveror Signedstarstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30, 2009 4:28 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

Protective daddy and mischievous mommy.  And then mischievous daddy.  0.~  I really like this one; those kinds of promises always yield nice results. 





Reviewer: Kagome_rocks Signedstarstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2009 9:25 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

nice start  i like it update soon





Reviewer: sarafina Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2009 5:23 pm
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1

AWWWW! It's all fluffy and cute!



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