Date: October 28, 2011 4:36 pm
Chapter number: 12
Forget my other review...i was on crack...lol....i loved the additions u put in this chapter....the scene with him n shippou is strong....loved it! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. As long as it took me to finally update, I spent a significant amount of time on this chapter. I am glad you liked the scen between Inuyasha and Shippou. I am hoping to update sooner this time. If you are still wanting to beta I may send something your way. Let me know if your up for it.
Date: February 25, 2010 11:11 pm
Chapter number: 9
lol...i loved your summary. :)
Author's Response: Haha! Me too, it leaves something to the imagination, which is nice for the readers. I love that you review each chapter, even though you have beta'd it already! Thanks again for the review!
Date: February 15, 2010 11:00 am
Chapter number: 9
Wow Inu has Kikyo wrapped around his little finger lol sweet. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Haha! That he does, I suppose the both of them have some tantalzing tricks up their sleeves so as to keep the other guessing. Thank you for the review, I am glad you enjoyed it. I hope you like the next chapter.
Date: January 24, 2010 6:35 pm
Chapter number: 8
lol...i love this chapter...i love when he first sees Kagome too... :) damn...i saw one typo that I missed. ah well...I'll do better next time. :) thanks again...i love this story. :)
Author's Response: It's all right, you did a fine job. Practice makes perfect anyway. Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I thought that would be a cool meeting, Inuyasha mistaking her for his girlfriend. Lol
Date: January 13, 2010 11:55 pm
Chapter number: 7
I just read this. WAsn't sure to make of it at first, but I love it. Man...all the scenes with Shippo and Inuyasha made me totally cry! Looks good so far. If you still need a beta, I'd be happy to help you. I've beta'd a few stories before. Let me know. Either way, I look forward to reading more! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the nice review. Yes, I am intrested in having a beta reader, mostly someone who will read over the chapter, and check it for grammatical errors, characterization and in general help me polish it before I release it to the public eye. So if you're game so am I! Iv'e never had a beta, so I'm a little unsure of how it works. I assume that I would send my chapter to you before posting it. I would need some type of email to send it to. Let me know!
Date: January 07, 2010 6:39 pm
Chapter number: 6
This is awesome! It is so refreshing to read something totally new! I haven't read a fic with this plot or idea before. I love your style of writing, your descriptions of things it's like you can picture it clearly in your mind as you read, the written emotion is excellent. I love the way Inu was introduced into Shippous life by way of punishment! I cracked up when he lunged across the conference table at that guy, cant' remember his name the first chap read it a few days back, but with every new chapter I always reread the chapter before first anyway, that was great! What I don't get is why Inu didn't notice that the orphanage owner was dressed nicely and feels that he can offer his fathers company money when the orphanage is in such bad shape? I know he noticed the mans dress and how bad the shape of the orphanage is but he didn't wonder how the owner could help his dad's company where is the money coming from? I guess that will come later. Also, why didn't Inu question about why Shippou was locked in a basement? I can't wait for updates! I check a couple times a day for them. Your AWESOME! I don't review much and I may not review every chapter but I plan on sticking with this story and I hope you do to. I'm in love with it, I can't wait to watch Inu change and I can't wait till Kikyou messes up with him, I can't wait to see how he and Kagome meet, well they met once, that was kinda funny. I'm addicted I want more so update real soon! I do feel bad for Shippou. I have to share what I think the scum orphanage owners are doing, they are stealing kids and selling them. They in a way stole Shippou. Am I close? Maybe you shouldn't tell me I want to read it! Thanks for such a unique point of view and fic can't wait for more. Until next chapter Write on!
Author's Response: First of all: Thank thank thank you for the heart felt review! It warmed my heart to see someone put so much detail into a story review, and it makes me want to continue writing and hoefully keep you interested lol. In answer to some of your questions, the reason Inuyasha's father depends on the money from Ikazuchi Corp in order to keep its standing and status quo so to speak. The reason Heten and Naraku are dressed so finley is obviously because of the money they posess through the company and its shares. I purposley made the orphanage run down looking in order to depict the unfortunate lives of the children who live there. Of course Heten could choose to fix it up, but so far he doesn't want too. He has enough money and power to stash away and to keep up appearences with Mr. Takashi. As for his orphange, as long as no one gets suspicious and comes poking around, Heten has decided to keep it the way it is. As for Inu not questioning about Shippo that is mostly because he wanted to get the child out of that enviornment as soon as possible, and you know how he is: action first, ask questions later, he being the brash half demon we know and love. I am so,so glad you love this story, I honestly do too. You have made my day with your wonderful review. Stay tuned! Love,Moonandstar331