Date: April 30, 2009 10:14 pm
Chapter number: 14
Title: A Tormented Soul
I was hoping for a kiss but this was another great chapter. Just don't forget to proof-read some of your sentences didn't make a lot of sense and I had to stop and try to decipher what you were trying to say. This story just keeps getting better and better, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Oh damn, that's what I forgot, I usually proof read the chapters before I upload them. And as for the kissing...hehe...wait and see...I want to make you guys suffer the suspense. But seriously don't worry they will definitely kiss. ;)