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Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2009 3:14 am
Chapter number: 14
Title: A Tormented Soul

I was hoping for a kiss but this was another great chapter. Just don't forget to proof-read some of your sentences didn't make a lot of sense and I had to stop and try to decipher what you were trying to say. This story just keeps getting better and better, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Oh damn, that's what I forgot, I usually proof read the chapters before I upload them.  And as for the kissing...hehe...wait and see...I want to make you guys suffer the suspense.  But seriously don't worry they will definitely kiss. ;)



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