Date: April 27, 2009 11:45 pm
Chapter number: 9
Title: SUPRISE ATTACK!
Just one critisism you had Kagome say “Be quiet, how can you expect me to just 'sit' down and watch my friends get hurt and I do nothing.” don't forget that would have thrown Inuyasha to the ground, otherwise another great chapter.
Author's Response: lol that actually true. never thought of that. Now i will pay attention to it from now on