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Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2009 4:45 am
Chapter number: 9
Title: SUPRISE ATTACK!

Just one critisism you had Kagome say “Be quiet, how can you expect me to just 'sit' down and watch my friends get hurt and I do nothing.” don't forget that would have thrown Inuyasha to the ground, otherwise another great chapter.

Author's Response: lol that actually true. never thought of that.  Now i will pay attention to it from now on



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