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Reviewer: Vampire Liaison Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2009 9:04 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter Two

It's a bit difficult to buy into. A worl where humans and demons both are normal, but a mix of the two is caged? I mean, Either all demons are hated, or he is treated badly for being half demon. But being caged and displayed as a demon? I mean, If people are standing next to one, they aren't likely to be scared of another becuase he's in a cage. Outraged, maybe. Hating him becuase of mizxed blood is one thing, but this...it just doesnt really fit because in this world he's not even that unusual. Maybe you will explain later, but I just don't see it.

Author's Response: Ah, I'm sorry for the confustion. But yes, more will be explained and revealed later in greater detail. But in a nutshell, he's caged because in his current state, he's dangerous to the public and not because he's simply half-demon. Don't worry; I promise everything will become clear...eventually. ^_^ Heh.





Reviewer: Thayet Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2009 6:03 am
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter Two

I was a little unsure after chapter 1 but I really think that I'm going to like this story after chapter 2.





Reviewer: Eluwei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2009 2:31 am
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter One

Very good.  I keep a watch out for your next post.  I'd like to see where you go with this.  It's very well writen.



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